Who: Dakota
What: Dakota was frightened
When: When thunder shock, Dakota was frightened.
Where:As the moon rose, thunder shock, and Dakota was frightened.
Why: As the moon rose,thunder shock, and Dakota was frightened as he was walking his dog
Story: As the moon rose, lighting shock down to earth as Dakota was walking his dog, Dakota’s dog was frightened by the lighting so he was panicking.
Today we were learning to use draft to make our sentences stronger. DRAFT means Delete, Rearrange, Add, Fix and talk, we use this to fix our sentence.
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